Build Good Habits Process Shot

Here's an update on the 'Build Good Habits' work I posted at the end of last week.

It's the next stage in process that I thought i'd share and maybe get some feedback on. This is just a vectorised version where I haven't done much refining but I find printing it out and getting on paper instead of a screen really helps get an idea of spacing etc.

So you can see some labels and notes to myself that I can then look at while refining the lettering in illustrator.

Please look at the attachment and read through the points that I'm not sure about, any help would be hugely appreciated.