Charitable Filmaking : Mark Update 2

Wanted to post one alternative that I've been working on for this guy.

The shadows from the last 'unbroken' version were really more of an afterthought, adapted from this breakdown for a solid black and white version.

Yesterday I was pretty sure that I prefered the 'unbroken' version as a primary...but for practical purposes / flexability, today I'm thinking this guy might be stronger choice?

Again, not 100% set on anything just yet (color's still flexible, etc.) but I mainly want to nail down the form factor.

Let me know what you guys think...