Onboard Screen Design

Hello Everyone,
I have tried creating a Onboard Screen for e-commerce Mobile Apps. I always try to make it cleaner, so users are happy to see it. the selection of my illustrator makes it in accordance with the mindset of the user. Where the user is easy to buy an item that he wants in the application and an online payment system that is not complicated.
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Thank you