The Laundry Room - Logo Sketch

This is a logo I'm working on right now. Clearly based on Candy Script, but edited. I've attached the original typesetting along with my edits to it - I typeset it, printed out a large copy, traced over it and then made the edits that I thought necessary to make it flow better as a mark. Will be vectorizing my edits this afternoon, and possibly adding different marks around the logo.