Made In Captivity (top)

The top half of a postcard I'm doing for Offa's Press promoting Nick Pearson's fine poem 'Made in Captivity'. I'm mainly after ways of improving the type - currently it's in Graublau - I like the slightly condensed style but not sure the font is exactly right. Any thoughts? Bottom half coming up (wish Dribbbles size restriction could be applied portrait!)

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