Baby Steps

I'm finally reaching the point with this lettering when I'm starting to like it:) It has been a long and tedious process of trying to figure out how to make this concept work. I've gone through multiple sketches and thousands of criticisms.
Blue areas highlight places that still need some tweaking but I'm super excited that the whole piece finally took shape and became properly readable without being too zeroed in on details.
I have shared the process so far on instagram:
https://www.instagram.com/p/Bn6wLjXjY6K/?taken-by=vistalybka