Tous Les Faits - There's Progress!

Hey Guys, so this one was a long time coming.. first i was in love with the previous design... but soon i wasn't anymore.

Got my hands on a brushpen last weekend, the guy that sold it didn't know much about calligraphy but so far i'm having some fun with it.

Very interested in your critique, i think it's better but some things need to be adjusted! Please teach me masters!