Rest or Die.

Working on this little piece today for a possible shirt design. Was asked to make a quick summer design for two color variations (light blue & pink) to get rid of some blanks.

I had this idea of the palm trees coming out of the head (nothing too crazy original, I know), but play with the idea of SLOWING DOWN. As a culture we talk about the more hustle you have the better things will be...while hustle is good and needed, rest and balance are needed as well.

Any comments for tweaks or suggestions? The type isn't final and the final design will have the brand mark at the bottom (circle). Also if you read all this you can tell my grammar is HORRIBLE. Does a comma go after, "Rest"?