Rejected Wedding Lettering (2)

Yet another from the wedding invite reject pile. I did this using the new calligraphy pen I finally bought (A proper one! With an ink well and everything!) And while I like how it looks in general, there are too many little things that need tweaking. I haven't practiced enough with that pen to feel confident. And while it may look good on paper, I'm struggling to get it to translate well digitally. Not only that, but I wasn't happy with how it was looking as a whole with the rest of the invite.