Travel Photobook Cover

Earlier this summer I went on a short holiday with my family to the Isle of Harris in the Outer Hebrides, Scotland. It was a really nice trip with some lovely photographs and fond memories. To help encapsulate the great trip and to explore print design I would love to create a family photobook from the trip.

This is a concept of the cover to help me to actually complete this project. Love the serif display font but unsure about the pairing with the "2017". Possibly need to adjust its weighting/size? Any thoughts or help would be great!