HEY XING! - What do you think?

Hey, yesterday i spend some time with animation for a "Self-Promo-Video" for my XING profile.. The final result will be something like this (its just an animatic - Illustrations and Audio/Sounddesign aren't final..).

Here the Vimeo-Link: https://vimeo.com/212641597

What do you think about it? Please give me some Feedback