Unicredit Bank App Design Pitch

I took the initiative of re-designing the app they have in the playstore ( if you are a client you can download the app form here https://itunes.apple.com/ro/app/mobile-b-nking/id555013028?mt=8 ) and because the difference is quite massive, I tried to pitch it to them.

If you have some good pitching tips feel free to send them my way. Also check out the attachment to see the screens.