Entrepreneur Lettering - vectors

Here's the vectored version of a logo I'm working on. I think this one's about done, but I'd love to know what you guys think.

Also, this was the first lettering project in which I forced myself to use (mostly) 90° and 45° angles. See attachment. What a bitch! I felt like I was learning how to use the pen tool all over again. But I will say that taking the time to properly draw out curves in this way makes the tweaking process SO MUCH EASIER.

Check the rationale here.

Big up @Colin Tierney for your feedback on this.