Glutton Colapse Lines

Here's some of the fantastic feedback I got at TypeThursday yesterday (https://www.facebook.com/TypeThursday/)

• Create more dimensionality by stacking each letter in front of the next one. This will also remove the weird negative space between the /G and the /l
• Increase the overshoot for the round letters like /G and /o to optically balance with the straight letters.
• Flick out the terminal tail of the first /t

What do you guys think?