Fractal Jackal Script

I've decided to go to the computer from this point. The "k" definitely needs some love and I've just got a lot of cleaning to do in general, but let me know what you think. Which "a" do you like best? I'm leaning toward the first. Any glaring issues here (apart from spacing, which needs work)? I'm thinking that I'll eventually try it with both words capitalized, but lowercase is kind of the heart and soul, so I'm starting there.