Lettering feedback

Do't be shy... Im on her to get better. Please let the critique rip. Thank you in advance.

Bonus thank you to anyone that shares a link or two to your favorite letterer or account that inspires you.

Also wanted to shout out to these guys for inspiring me on Dribbble and IG. Thank you to @Bob Ewing @Ryan Hamrick for the long nights and the hunger to want to get better.