Eid Mubarak - Selamat Idul Fitri - Lettering, Logo, Logotype

This is a phrase "Happy Eid al-Fitr" in Indonesian. So what I'm doing here is practicing lettering with that sentence, because today is Eid al-Fitr celebrated by all Muslims. I'm still using a modern psychedelic style, with cheerful colors that represent diversity. I also added a little graphic element of a happy smile. What do you think?

Selamat merayakan Idul Fitri buat teman-temanku semua. Taqabbalallahu minna wa minkum. Mohon maaf atas segala salah dan kekurangan saya.