Logo for "Say it All"

This logo is for a customized gift book start-up. Was given 2 hours to come up with one and this is one of the completed examples. Any feedback would be appreciate that could help keep the main styling same but make logo more refined.

Due to limited time, I have based the idea on how kids add decorated text on their school projects, hand made greeting cards, etc.

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