H&H Premium Logo

This was my contest's entry on FreeLancer, unfortunately it didn't get selected, It was decided because of course there are more people who have better taste than me and experience so I'm not sad at least I learnt something new, I tried making exquisite and premium logo for a clothing company just as they asked I tried making transparent version of the logo too, Please do let me know if there is any mistake or if u can help me design more premium logo's