My Wedding Invites

Full final, coming soon. I've gone a bit playful with the textual flow, I almost worry it's bordering on illegible. However, the lady likes the elegance of it, and the letterpress styling of the layout. Thoughts on the typographic play?

This is a smaller version to scale on screen... and I have to say, designing my own invites has been an interesting workout. I'm way hypercritical of it - I've done at least 10 unique designs, and I dont' like any of them 100%.