Clarity+Vision

I am working on a bio/marketing block for myself to go with the identity on a new microsite/portfolio/somethingsomething. Please read and give me pointers. I am really working on the pacing of it. Thanks!

"I'm a smart guy, the Web is the jungle to my Jim, and I — like Spider-Man — spin a web of awesome everywhere I go. You see, I embrace the bleeding edge like a daredevil embraces his bike, letting go only to grace the air and fly for those few precious seconds of hang-time, and grabbing the handles right before certain death, I land like only I can land. I fear nothing, and challenge even the challenge like a bull seeing red. I fear no task, and look forward to the next, knowing that if it can be done, it is I that can do it. I'm a smart guy, knowing that the field is changing like the melting clocks of Dali, I am persistently chasing the next hurdle like the track star, and like that gleaming runner in the midafternoon Sun, I have my sight on that eternal goal: winning. I am a winner, and not because of my knowledge, but my ability to attain new knowledge, obsolete the moment stored, but useful in that fleeting moment. I am cool, and not like the Fonz, but like a summer night, right after a fierce rain. Nothing can raise my temp in the face of a challenge, and you'll need that when the next milestone is at arm's reach and that gargantuan chasm seems too large to leap.

I am Finley, and with that clarity and vision, I tackle each day."