Style Development v1

I've had a new visual style in mind for a while that I've been wanting to develop. It's a look I haven't really seen so I'm not sure yet how to get it out of my head. This test drawing is the closest I've come but I keep messing it up when I start to color it. The style in full color is what I believe will make it more unique. That is, if I can eventually capture what I envision.