product placement

hey guys, looking for some feedback on this. i'm not one to show a laptop or something in my designs, but it looked too sweet to pass up. this is the landing page that features a web product about data. shown is the upper portion of a very long, fun detailed page.

i'm imagine this turning into video. so somewhere i'll add a play button and this whole top portion (gray area) will be a video, not just the computer screen, but the entire area.

also, not sure if you can see it at this size, but i have little data illustrations coming out the back of the screen to add character to this simple layout.

thoughts?