The Bear That Couldn't Forget

I'm writing and illustrating a children's book. It is the Goldilocks and the Three Bears fairy tale retold as a noir detective story. I'd love some feedback and suggestions. Thanks for taking a look! Check out videos of me working on other illustrations for this book at: http://youtu.be/PiIOO4BhUrM and http://youtu.be/M0Mo-wmT6Ns