Soshootme Wireframe Sketch

This is a sketched wireframe of the site I'm working on for my dad, because its not proper paid work its perfect for uploading and getting feedback on.

right side is the sketch, centre is the noted sections and on the left I've quickly drawn the wireframe in Ps incase you can't see in the sketch.

What I'm looking for is feedback on the order and structure. He's going to be promoting himself as a freelance film and photographer person, so its important to show off his skills as well and as quickly as possible, and then provide the user with a fast way of getting in touch. Let me know your thoughts.