Sun-Protection Firm Mark

Hello design community!
Hope you are having a productive week so far.

Rejected mark for a recent project, proposed for a firm that has 30 years of experience in production and installation of sun-protection equipment.

The company name starts with an "L" hence the L blocking out the shape of the sun.

I would love to hear your thoughts on the mark, what would you add or take away to make it look better? Comment your thoughts.

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Have a great & productive day!