Book 5 The Voyage of the Dawn Treader REDESIGN

I have had fun redesigning The Chronicles of Narnia series. I have one more to share for now, but I hope to finish the series. I wanted to enter into D&AD when I found out about their new blood brief was to redesign The Chronicles of Narnia. I'm worried about timing, I found out about it late, but I still want to enter even if it isn't finished. Anyways I'd love to hear feedback and comments! Thanks!