Daily UX Writing Challenge: Day 11

I just found out Dribbble really can only put certain size too...I'm so sorry for the image cut, I'm going to write the challenge scenario here:

Scenario: An elderly user is doing a Google search to find an easy way to buy contact lenses online.

Challenge: Write a title and meta description for a website that sells subscription contact lenses delivered to a user every 30 days — convince them to try it.

Title: 60 characters max
Meta Description: 160 characters max

I only put the revised version here (if there's any) since Dribbble doesn't seem to allow multiple pics per post. I write the full process of this challenge here: https://medium.com/@siti.rahmadini29/daily-ux-writing-challenge-day-11-59ea5f69e94a

And here's the masterpost if anyone wants to see the rest: https://medium.com/@siti.rahmadini29/my-dailyuxwritingchallenge-masterpost-f45658c66a88

Feedbacks are highly welcomed, I would really appreciate it! Thank you so much in advance!