Daily UX Writing Challenge: Day 2

I only put the revised version (if there's any), since Dribbble doesn't seem to allow multiple pics per post. I write the full process of this challenge here: https://medium.com/@siti.rahmadini29/daily-ux-writing-challenge-day-2-f65f8bf0d66c

And here's the masterpost if anyone wants to see the rest: https://medium.com/@siti.rahmadini29/my-dailyuxwritingchallenge-masterpost-f45658c66a88

Feedbacks are highly welcomed, I would really appreciate it! Thank you so much in advance!