Batman 1989 Title Sequence Styleframe - Work In Progress

I just started on a new personal project based on the title sequence of the 1989 Batman film.

I remember the first 30 seconds of the title and the goosebumps I got when the "BATMAN" typography came on screen, of course I didn't call it "typography" back then. I was 8 years old. So, I'm taking a shot at my own rendition of the title sequence. Wish me luck.

For those who are unfamiliar with the original title sequence, here is the link. http://youtu.be/X4ydxgekFls

I would really like feedback on the project, critiques — not praise. This project is being done as a learning experience for me.