Visualdecree type roughs

I'm always afraid to upload work for fear of being told it's utter crud. But i realized tonight that the only way to improve at the things i am not so good at (type being one of them) - is to take the plunge and just upload it.

I would welcome any guidance, tips or constructive criticism. I know this is far from a finished article. But it's a great learning experience and i know there are plenty of good typographers here so i would welcome the help to improve version upon version.