Early Detection Plan Logo

This is a logo I'm working on for an early detection plan for breast cancer. It's a programs where women can get monthly reminders to get breast self exams.

The first one plays on the idea of tying a ribbon as a reminder.

The second one abstractly uses the negative spaces created by the "e" and "D" and the "p" to recall the initials "EDP". The logo for the National Breast Cancer Foundation is branches so I played with the idea of leaves and a bud to represent the "early" in edp.

The others are pretty self explanatory.