Memoir iPhone App Landing Page

Here is a landing page I am working on for Memoir. Please give me some feedback on how it is... Too chopped and segmented? Or no?

This app has taken so many shapes, but we feel we finally have found the right one, so we submitted it to the App Store. I will tweet as soon as it is live.

Thanks to Catt for the iPhone template!

PS, the lame stock photo of the girl will be replaced with a real snap from the video we did.

As always - Real Pixels