New Personal Branding-WIP

So I am abandoning the whole creative WHAT! branding. I have decided to go back with using my name. This hand lettering is based off a hand painted name sign that was on my grandpa's cement mixer that was done over 30 years ago. I was drawn to this because of it's history, the fact that it was hand painted and original. I am planning on refining it some and would love any input anyone might have.

Cheers_bob