Collab

Late night dribbble here. Looking to get some feedback on the how the title reads. It should read "Creating an atmosphere of collaboration." Do it work? I've been looking at it way to long.

Check on the attachment that will probably be closer to the size it will appear at.

I need to ship this in the am, so any help is appreciated.

Wallpapers versions of this are available for download here: http://cl.ly/HzFn