Thirty Five

Currently working on a logo for a cafe called 35 / thirty five.

I don't think any of them are right yet and so feedback would be welcome!

The issues I've found:
A) the tail on the 5 isn't right.
B) the intersection and join of the curve on the 5 is wrong
C) the tail of the 3 is too far away for me

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