Color exploratory

So, I took a step back from my last post for this lockup, and tried to rework it. I started with recreating the lettering to be a bit more interactive, and with that new lettering, I adjusted the composition around. I'm happy with how it's coming along. I think it's starting to read a bit better!

Just starting to think about color, but I thought I would at least show my progress so far.

Cheers!